Comments on: Promises http://theshyam.com Ramblings from the Real Shyam; You know, unlike those other fake Shyams! Sat, 28 Jan 2012 06:10:32 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Niranjan http://theshyam.com/fiction/promises/#comment-415 Niranjan Sat, 10 Dec 2011 01:53:41 +0000 http://theshyam.com/?page_id=110#comment-415 How did you decide to try it from the girl's perspective? How did you decide to try it from the girl’s perspective?

]]> By: V http://theshyam.com/fiction/promises/#comment-15 V Tue, 21 Jul 2009 18:27:55 +0000 http://theshyam.com/?page_id=110#comment-15 How did you "dream" this one up :) ? How did you “dream” this one up :) ?

]]> By: Mike http://theshyam.com/fiction/promises/#comment-14 Mike Fri, 17 Jul 2009 04:27:38 +0000 http://theshyam.com/?page_id=110#comment-14 I liked this. I was half-expecting Victor to be a ghost after the crash (thinking that he'd died instantly in the car crash). The most important piece you captured, in my opinion, was the mix of emotions after "Sweetheart" found out he died--this felt very real to me. Thanks for sharing. I liked this. I was half-expecting Victor to be a ghost after the crash (thinking that he’d died instantly in the car crash).

The most important piece you captured, in my opinion, was the mix of emotions after “Sweetheart” found out he died–this felt very real to me. Thanks for sharing.

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